Cold Emails Content
by Jia-Bin Huang and Himanshu Gupta
Your email should contain the following four elements:
- Subject line: clear and simple so the contact can get the gist of email without actually opening it (long ones make it truncated, hence skipping)
- Greeting: “Hello”: Follow the professional polite etiquette. Respect the titles.
- Introduction: “My name is Inigo Montoya.”: My name is NAME. I am a POSITION from AFFILIATION. I am writing to WHAT DO YOU WANT.
- Context/Connection: “You killed my father.”: Provide SPECIFIC context, personal connection, background information in your email. Do your homework!
- Call for action: “Prepare to die.”: Spell out what you expect the recipient to do after reading the email. Make it ACTIONABLE (e.g., set up a short meeting, answer a question, or prepare to die).
Warning
Don’t demand, make it a preference. See Casey Fiesler’s cold email template
Other Points
- Use a proper profile picture
- Use your name in English for full sender name and ID
- (my take) Consistent format: write in a notepad and then paste without style (ctrl+shift+v)
- Highlight the key points by making it italic/bold
- For undergrad students, your email is a writing sample. ZERO errors, clear and structured
- Sign off with “sincerely”, name, your contact info
- If you can attach your CV and Test Scores as a link, it will be better. This will reduce storage space.1
My notes:
- make sure to read the PI’s website for email instruction (note that if they have a special email title and you don’t follow, they will never see your email)
- make sure to check for the cultural way of writing names; do not use first name instead of last name (some unis write last-first, and if you are not familiar with the culture, you might use the first name)
- if necessary, put your starting date (fall, summer, etc) in the intro or in the subject
- schedule emails to reach at 08:00-ish (PI’s time zone obviously)
Ref:
- https://x.com/jbhuang0604/status/1420611683035324425
- https://x.com/hgupta84/status/1437081893254701056